I agree with Arkaine, nice job and please update! And also, ignore the flamer, he wouldn't know a good story if it ate his pie =P

Pay no atention to the man behind the curtain...err...tha flamers behind the curtain, I should say. I was appalled to find merely two Bubble Bobble fics on this site, and pleasantly surprised to find a good one. I already like Devilen. Please continue this fic; if there are only going to be two Bubble Bobble fics, you should be the 50 percent that's good!
Peace, Love, and Bubble Blowing Dragons,
Arkaine.

this was so lame...
this is such a random game...
why do you even want to try to write a fic on this game?
no one is going to read it!
u suck..nd so does ure fic