 ProLiferChelle 9/6/10 . chapter 1This is almost poetic in format; beautifully so. I love the
lines:
Paulina's tears
Joe's prayers.
That captures the two of them perfectly.
I also like that you put three dots instead of a period at the end; it leaves the ending open to interpretation.
Altogether, a lovely work. |
 George-n-His-Iz 12/28/07 . chapter 1Loved it. Please consider doing more AW stories. I miss this soap! |
 Laurie Lu 8/15/07 . chapter 1Wow. It was wonderful, I loved it. Just what I was looking for... |
 lisehrin 7/20/07 . chapter 1This was all kinds of lovely. Short and simple and sweet - it made me wistful for this dear old show. I like that you've made it kind of vague and mysterious as to what's going on. And I totally empathize with Lorna wanting to think that in some other world those good old friends are still going strong. |
 Teri 5/5/07 . chapter 1 Very nice. I liked Lorna and Gabe as a couple and you reminded me of many of the couples and people that I enjoyed in Bay City. Thanks. |