i like it keep it up

Man, even NARUTO passed up the chance!

good!

Hum I would say great...but this not a fanfiction this a novelisation of the manga and as I already read the manga there isn't much point for reading this.

way to go. can't wait for your next update.

...Is this a novelized version of the manga? I'm LOST.

Wow great starting :) it sounds really interesting, cant wait to read more!

That was really REALLY good ^.^ I can't really think of what else to say that's better then good at the moment xP But this is truely better than good. ^^