Wow ecabs...you almost made me cry! I actually got a little teary when Laurent was drinking and she was dreaming of Edward. *snif!* I definately think you should continue! I'm excitied to find out what happens with it all-dum dum DUM! Update soon!

great story so far i like it... update soon please :)

Wow, this is really fantastic! I'm so anxious to see what the wolves are going to do about this...!

NO! Dangit, you beat me to posting a story like this. I have the first chapter of mine halfway written. Crud.

Well, anyway... The story's wonderful so far. Maybe that's just 'cause I'm a bit obsessed with this AU plot-line.

Great job so far! A whole lot better than mine... *cries* :-P

Oh, i really like this story! You should update it... And the only thing that bothered me was that it was too short! MAKE IT LONGER!..

**OTF**

I totally think you should continue this. Maybe I don't count since I know the story, but it is a fantastic idea! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up girl!

Beautiful! Excellent start to what looks to be a fabulous story in the making! I'm already wanting more! Just Lovely!

This looks very good. Very promising. I've always wondered what would have happened if Laurent had gotten to Bella. Awesome job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep writing! Its really good!

This looks very good. :]