Woah!! Jade would be perfect psychologist! It's as if he read Anise's mind! I loved every part of this one-shot, like the eyes and the design, it was absolutely perfect! Perfect deduction from you too! This is going to my favorites... =3

This is good, Jade going on about psychology.The way you did the observations was awesome, very ingenious.Anise's feelings of being found out as the spy was written very well,u can really understand what she's going through and all.All in all,this was a good fic.

I'm not gonna lie; that was perfect.

Jade, Anise: characterization was spot-on, and this plot could have been added to the game seamlessly. No spelling or grammar errors. Simple, but engaging style of description, and believable dialogue.

Good work. Really good work.

Oh! That last part of Jade's analysis was so perfect!

Anyhow, excellent job. Jade was flawlessly depicted. His dialogue was so accurate, I could practically hear his light, sarcastic voice accompanying it. I really liked this!

YC: I forgot how much i missed your work ! ^^

Wow, so many symbolisms..@_@;; Anyway, it's awesome! ^^

Hm...makes one wonder if Jade knew about her...situation the whole time or not. Well done, as always, ^^.

Awesomeness. I never WOULD have come up with something like that. XD

Three words for this fic: Nail on the head.

Whoops, I guess that's four. ^o^;; Didn't count the 'the'--I think in Engrish, anyway...

Man, I love psychology and interpreting things, ESPECIALLY metaphors. To come up with all of Tokunaga's representations all on your own, that's really amazing. But that's old news, as you know. :P

Nice. :3 A worthy continuation to an already awesome one-shot. I think it's about time you and Vil worked together on something!

It kind of surprises me that Jade wouldn't press the issue about insincerity on Anise; after all, he's not really close to her at this point, so I don't see why he wouldn't double-check on her. But then again, she is just a little girl. :P

Good ficlet. I like. I wonder if Vil will reply to this with a one-shot of her own. :P

Wow, now that's something. Jade picks out many things strikingly true about Anise then says "But of course, you're not like that are you?" That fits Mr.I-like-to-mess-with-people so well it's scary.

*nods* That was deep. Very deep. But interesting. You portrayed Jade perfectly. Two thumbs up.

Nice work!