Reminds me of something the Zero boys would do from loveless

This was so funny XD made giggle a little

thank you for the info. o.o;
I might just add this to my favorites! x3

thank you very funny! ^^
every done any of these in a con?
if you have, end me the link! :D

that person below me who doesn't have a account, your retarded... this short chapter was written by the author... so she can write it however she wants... it doesn't have to relate to the real kingdom hearts at all, and hey whats so bad about kairi bashing anyway?

lol. that was pretty funny. my very small innocent, good side of me feels sorry for kairi but the rest of me is laughing. if i did a prank like that, i would laugh soo hard in my room when no one is looking >.

** you! ** your mother's eye sockets! What the hell were you thinking when you wrote this hidious monstrosity?!?!?! If you're honestly THAT stupid that you'd believe this would ACTUALLY happen in game canon, then I minise well put you through a ** meat grinder and end your misery now! Remember, if you actually PLAYED the games, you'd know both Sora and Riku liked KAIRI. Both Sora and Riku fought for KAIRI'S saftey. I'm a RikuxSora fangirl as well... but DAMN. This is ** insane.

...
D:
If I wasn't so jaded as it was, I think I'd be insanely angry about this. >: I'll spare you the rant; it'd be falling on deaf ears anyway.
By the way, sweetie, that wasn't a chapter. It was a stupid author's note. It would just be OMG TOO MUCH WORK to just edit the first chapter to say "RikuSex" (I'm not even touching THAT one...) instead of whatever stupid thing it was before, huh? Ugh.

Wow.

That was one of the shittiest things I have EVER read. In my ENTIRE life. It is an insult to literature. It is an insult to fanfiction. It an an insult to Kingdom Hearts. You should not be putting this...this...GARBAGE up on a respectable site! It is ridiculous! Take a few grammer classes, then come back and see me!

--NS

HAHAHA It was mean and funny at the same time >=D.
Espeaically in the end when he said Fer Sure. Remind me of that song.

AHAHAHA my sister and I laughed soo friggen hard when we read this xD Yea, we don't like Kairi much either hahaha
nice you brilliant, brilliant author!!

Ciao~

Ahh! They're so mean!!

XD

That was oddly entertaining...

Fer sure!

That was... terrible. :/

Hahaha, Kairi sucks. :D

muhaha!
nasty nice stuff!