That was by far the cutest thing I've read! Seriously, I decided to investigate what the song sounded like and I fell over in a fit of giggles. Yes, the lyrics, tied alongside with Sue's POV, described Sue's antsy and daydreamish persective on Reed Richards perfectly.



Excellent work!
Sakura123

FallenAgain intertwined the lyrics and the storyline magestically.

i loved it, it was awsome!

Maybe Reed would know Sue is alive if she'd actually talk to him...

AWESOME! I like how you got it to be emotional. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!