Ahh chapters so short DX!
I like the concept of this story, a lot~ Will definitely come back and read more when you update :D!
Constructively, I think maybe a little more detail could go a long way. Perhaps it's just me, but it feels like you very quickly brush over some things when you could dwell on them a little and really draw a picture .. so to speak :3

Ah good Cody. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Nakakainis ka pala...hindi ko alam yun.

I've read your A/Ns...and you're an angry person...nice so far. Hit me if my reviews don't satisfy.

woah...sweet intro...I wasn't expecting that

wow, cody found out. and is useing his wisdom in making her feel guilty about it (as she should) but leting her decide to tell ken. he also tells her straight out that ken wont like it. i like this, very real. update.

This story FUCKIN sucks. Davis will never kiss Yolei! >:( I read your profile, and it's pricks like you who act like they own the frikin show.

She belongs to Ken!! @w@ *Kenyako fan 4evah* LOL

But I like the plot of this O: Poor Ken-chan TwT But well, let's see how Davis' revenge turns out :3 Keep up the good work *thumbs up* >w

What is the tally a vote I think she belongs with davis.

Is this based off of the CD "Michi e no Armor Shinka"?
If youre familiar with the japanese version of the anime i mean...
well, keep up the good work.
~much luv

wow poor ken yolies cheating...and cavis is being a looser...

Yup.

I like it. I get where you're coming from now too.

Oh my... Davis is a bastard...And Yolei, how could she cheat on Ken? He's perfect!! Anyway, I would like to see how this unfolds!

sometimes i sit back and wonder.. what do you do at home that you think of this stuff.. then i dont really want to know.. hahahaa

Hm...

Okay, one, it seems like your taking Davis' character to the extreme...I hope he redeems himself in a way.

But this is an interesting plot. But I really hope that Davis isnt going to be all "evil-bitchy" in the entire story. And I hope he isnt too evil.

In otherwards, I hopeing you dont bash him to a pulp.

OMG, Davis shouldn't be so mean! Yolei and Davis or Ken and Davis shold get something, but Davis is too cruel! Though Yolei isn't worth Ken if she cheated on him with Davis... This is interesting, as always, please continue!