I enjoyed the balance of the dreamy warmth of Ichabod and Ana's beautiful kissing scene, followed by the starkness of Masbath's startling news, and once again, the closeness of the couple. Well done.

I like the descriptive tones of this chapter. Each word and action is filled with tenderness and a sense of smoldering desire in the two characters. One can feel the longing between them, which does well to build on their relationship even further. Having Anabelle reveal her early life was a nice touch and I'm glad you declined to have Ichabod speak of his parents. You instinctively knew that it was not the right time. The tender kisses they shared on the stairs were very titillating, as was the chaise lounge discussion. Very well done!

Speaking of Katrina and her unforgiving spirit was very poignant. I could see how Anabelle would feel a bit of guilt about her feelings for Ichabod. But all events happen for a reason and this is the time and place she is in so she must embrace it. I enjoyed this chapter. The last line was perfect.

Wonderfully passionate chapter! Your description of Ichabod's kisses left me weak in the knees! Well done!

Your story is most impressing! I really enjoy reading it! Keep up the great work--I look forward to your next update!

Strange way indeed to begin a relationship but sweet nonetheless. And I believe everything happens for a reason. Well done!

I do believe the Constable is falling in love, despite his sorrow over Katrina's loss. You are doing an admirable job at showing his emotional battle as well as Anabelle's secret desire for him. I am reluctantly expecting an ironic twist but I shall say no more. Well done!

Lovely chappie Chickies! Ah but all the sexual tension wow! You cut cut it with a knife, butter it and eat it! Hehe Can't wait till the next chappie. Till then my Sugars!

~Rhia~

Brilliant! Well-written, well-conceived, interesting, and titillating in all the right spots! Well done!

Nice Chappie Chickides! Hehe poor Ichabod is ging to be mighty sore when he wakes! Hehe can't wait till the next chappy!

~Rhia~

Another great chapter! -giggles- Ichabod being drunk is just about the funniest thing I've ever read. Anways...ooh, the horseman...I can't wait to see where you go with that. -whispers- I'm not so sure that Katrina is actually dead, but that's just me..

Can't wait for you to update!

*hits both Gebo and Nerds on the head* No killing off Anabelle, best be a fake head! Or I shall beat you senseless with Jareth's Ridding crop!

~Rhia~

Wow...you're quite the talented author! I really enjoyed reading this chapter--you write Ichabod so well! I look forward to your next update!

Your story is getting reall good! The mystery in your fanfiction is different than others I've encountered. I can't wait for you to update!

Cliffhangers. I dislike cliffhangers, especially cliffhangers placed in a well written story such as this one. Great job on this! I really can't wait for you to update!