nice very nice...MORE BATMAN! j/p keep writing i'll await a update

Good job. A couple mistakes here and there but no big deal. Your story could use alittle bit of a better flow. It's a little problem and a big problem. But don't worry. In time you'll get it. The more you go into a story the better it gets.

Also. You used the nun idea from my story! I'm just joking! I really like the idea. It looks like the andriod it made from both Charlie and Johana. Update soon. Can't wait for Vig to appear. He is appearing later, right?

Very interesting premise you have here. I would suggest a beta-reader to look over the grammar and spelling, as well as the flow of the story. The flashback at the end of the chapter had me thinking of the Question (what other "Charlie" in the comics lived in a Catholic orphanage and was picked on as a child?). As an unabashed Question fan, I'll be keeping an eye on this story to see how it turns out.