Seriously, this is the first time I ever actually had to try (and fail) to stop myself from crying over something I'm reading. Really, really well written.

Cool story! You're good at psychological stuff! ^_^

...Wow.

*in awe*

you do sad/creepy/hopeful relief well. thanks for sharing!

Kinda creepy. But sweet in a creepy way.

Wow... just... wow. This fic was so beautifully written. I loved it.

i was crying by the end = )

This was a deep and touching story. It could make a person cry, with the amount of emotion portrayed. I applaud you, not only for making such a touching story, but for also using a character that no one ever uses: Zetsu. He's always written off as a spy, but no one ever goes to the lengths of an in-depth analysis, as you have. Your writing portrayed what he would think, and that is excellent. May you continue to write such riveting tales.

May the Force be with You.

This is wonderful.
I never expected to find anything this well written at ffnet.
sayaka_sama was absolutely right to have recommended you on S.O.N.P.S.

Thank you :)

If the fics you write now are any testament to how you will do in the future, I would gather that you will be very successful in the literary career you seek.

Beautiful~ :3

that was so *sniff* sad and *sniff* happy and *sniff* poetic and *sniff* damnit you really should publish this somehow. find some magical way to let mk know about it and tell him to make it a comic or something cuz that was pure art. way better than sasoris and deidei-kuns put together. you should really consider putting this in a poetry notebook or something. look at me getting all sad and teary-eyed. *wipes eyes and sniffles* keep it up
shikaxomi09

This was so touching and beautiful. A very creative concept and a absolutely clear, well thought meaning behind it. I applaude you. :)

Really touching. I think sometimes, we fail to see the impact we make on the lives of others.

So sad and well-written...

If you've read as many books as I have, it's difficult for me to find one that can make me cry. Good job, you moved me enough to do so.