Reviews for On the Train from Garden

b-nothing 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuselol, ah Rinoa
Crystal Emotions 2007-04-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw! that was adorable! I love the Zell/Squall pairing too. I want another fluff! more more! hehehe ^-^
erivic 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abusepretty good, although i like rinoa & squall better, because of their relationship. and it's kind of confusing calling both the guys and girls by hair colour, cause i thought you were talking about quistis whenever you said 'blonde' so that might be something you want to keep in mind. good use of language, but so blunt. it would have been nicer if the story was elaborated a bit, so the readers (AND ME!) could have gotten the story even more clearly. and when people get cut off, it's better if you use a '-' or say that they were cut off, otherwise it's just confusing. check out my inuyasha and gacha gacha fanfics! :) keep up the good (but blunt :() writing
Silver Wolf 2007-04-08 ch 1, anon.	abuse:3 ... I LIKE THIS PAIRING A LOT TOO NE~ Cute fic. Hope you'll write more for this pairing. Because the game is old and doesn't get any new things like FF7's Advent Children, less people write for it.