i know this kind of picky but i dont like how the kids talk all fancy like

OMG! that is so funny! the brainiac talk of the kids is hilarious! love the ending!-

lol at the ending

Well, it's interesting, except I don't think you could just walk into Ganon's lair... ah well, don't sweat the technical stuff! .

Rami: Dorf-samaaaa! *glomp*

Yume:-_-;; Anyway, nice start, though the characters seemed a little simplistic at times. Please more!

Write on! Yume

...no offense or anything but i cant believe link and zelda would have such dorky kids...

time have ganon get his butt kicked