update this already the waiting is killing me

I can't comment on this one... because its seemed like it's only one part of a whole... and that I will only really understand once I've read the second part.

I'll have to wait for the next chapter to know. But I wanted to tell you how much I love your story and how incredible it was reading this. It was one of those that moved me and made me remembered that even only by reading we can learn.

Now... as it's 3h22 in the morning... I'll have to go fall on my bed if I can find it and not fall asleep where I am... Well it's stupid from me to say that as my bed is just beside my computer... as you see once I stop reading, if I'm tired it catch up to me real fast ^^

good night, buena notche (if it's writen like that ^^) but really from me in France:


Bonne nuit ^^

I thing my heart stopped in this chapter...

You give feelins a new levels in each chapter you've written but this one... amazing is not strong enough a word. There might not be any word to describe it.

So... as I can't seem to be able to say more... just know that you are one of the best writter I have found in this site. I love many a writter... but you are amoung at least ten that blew me away...

I'll go read the next chapter even knowing I will come back to you to protest that there isn't any more to read after because that chapter was you last update and I'll have to wait like evryone else...


So I'll just go... at least this review gave me some time to make my heart find it's rythme again.

one of the voices that gives Harry choices said that 'he surprised them' by his choice... if they really knew his soul they shouldn't have been surprised. ANd even then, if like I suppose the great aeon is a forced that is in Harry but isn't him... Harry shouldn't have been punished like that nor any of the others...

I admit I don't understand and really don't like, almost hate, those power that gave the punishment to Harry and the others. I would almost prefer to see them disapear all together of the world of Spira. Because someone who gives that kind of punishment to a being like Harry wish I think wasn't at fault... then they shouldn't have the power to do so...

sorry for all that... it's just I felt as I would explose if I didn't write it and tell him to another ^^ Now that I feel better I'll go back to reading ^^

Again, holy **. You write the most indepth aweome stories ever!

I think I can easily say that this is my favorite of your stories. I've loved the whole concept of Final Fantasy X from the moment I started to play the game. The fayth, the aeons, and I think the backstory of the game is incredible.
And you found a great and believable way to fuse it with one of my favorite book series.
i particularly like the scene where Yuna summons the Great Aeon, and everyone realizes that Harry IS the Great Aeon. Really looking forward to reading the next chapter on this one.
Anyways, I like your writing and the way you kept to the plot of the game while still adapting it to fit what you came up with. I liked the way you pointed out Yunalesca's sacrifice and what she did it for and wanted. I know she's supposed to be one of the game's bad guys, but I've never really seen her that way. You put it into words excellently, how the hope she fought for was the ability to live your life in peace for a while even knowing it wouldn't last, but just knowing that it would come.
Sorry, I'm rambling. Anyhow, looking forward to the next update.
P.S.; I also really like Birth of a Phoenix and Torn Between Sides, I'll drop reviews on them later.

You have got to continue, I mean I have never watch Final Fantasy but this is way better than that.

KYAH! I've been waiting for them to find out forever! What happens next? Is Harry goint to destroy a huge chunk of the world? Oh, I eagerly await the next chapter!

Poor Harry, the pain that he's expecting and has been expecting must be nearly all-consuming...Well, hurry up write more...but take your time...hehe

Though seeing Harry destroy the world while Yuna and the rest of her self-righteous brood look on in horror would be viscerally satisfying i somehow doubt that this is quite where you're going with this. I personally, then hope that you at least allow harry to take out Bevelle and in so doing throw down that false prophets that are the maesters, and maybe yuna and the rest of them but spare tidus. Bottom line, Yuna must die, she deserves it. Anywhoo you are a prodigious author and this story is a masterwork of fanfiction the likes of which one rarely has the pleasure of reading, i regret but one thing and that is that the story is quickly finding it's close.

EPIC!

Great Chapter, a bit short, But Great none the less. The Revelation that Harry was the Fayth was Perfectly done, Kudo's
Tidus is the Anti Harry...Hm i suppose that could work.

Keep up the good work :)

hi. so powerful!

And the revelation is pretty damn enjoyable to read.

Wow, I can't believe Harry allowed Tidus to touch him at all, after a Betrayal of that magnitude.

I was hoping Harry would have tried to rub Yuna's face in her actions a little more, but I suppose he was resigned to it.

Betrayed by both friends old and new, little wonder that the Great Aeon wants to destroy the world. I have my fingers crossed for Yuna and her bunch of self-righteous cowards to see the devastation first hand - I also vote for them not to survive.

Living 10 years of peace doesn't seem so bad. People live in areas of high volcano, tsunami, hurricane and cyclone activity all the time and get on with their lives. Somehow, they manage not to think "Gosh, maybe destroying the world is the answer. If anyone survives, they'll never have to worry about uncontrollable disasters again!"

Having Tidus face off against Harry makes me feel a little sick. I feel like, if Harry is the 'greatest victim' then having him be betrayed YET AGAIN by Tidus fighting (and, no doubt, SOMEHOW, defeating him) is just more abuse piled onto the mountain.

I want to see regret! Horror! Desperate self-revulsion at their actions! The remind me of the Wizards, all too willing to commit sins in their own interest - convincing themselves that they're in the right.

I have a nasty suspicion that that won't happen, however.

*Builds signs and sparkly flags that say "Yay Destroyer!" and "This time: He means it!"*

absolutely amazing chapter. the emotional climax to harry transforming, it is wonderful. the visualization is great as i could almost see what you were discribing. i cant wait for the next chapter. update asap.