 Hesunohana 2009-06-29 . chapter 1 sweety ! and a little naughty ? |
 kallou 2009-04-21 . chapter 1that was sweet |
 So-I-Thought 2008-10-04 . chapter 1lol that was cute and funny I loved it! |
 narutoavatarrocks 2008-06-08 . chapter 1that was good u should right more chapters |
 queenofbitches 2008-02-06 . chapter 1Short and sweet. I loved it =P |
 rain 2008-01-05 . chapter 1 that was really cute. hope to hear more. |
 Elli Cole 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Aww. That was funny and adorable. Well done. |
 Anita Tseu 2007-12-12 . chapter 1Cool! ^_^ lol, funny. |
 Panda-Chan21 2007-11-07 . chapter 1That is hysterical! Love it! |
 Akiyuki-no-ai 2007-09-25 . chapter 1Kyaa! I love this! UPDATE ASAP!
I'll review every chapter ;) |
 FlameTwirler 2007-07-21 . chapter 1Hmm...cute. I love the way Gaara is the focus even though he's an active character and never says a word. He's got a way with the silent, ne? ^_- |
 CrazyCat95 2007-07-06 . chapter 1PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE! |
 XxDesert.demon.lovexX 2007-06-29 . chapter 1i luv it =] |
 Winter Ashby 2007-05-19 . chapter 1Wow. This was so cute. And I just loved the idea of it. You have a fantastic style that just draws me in. I particularly love the last paragraph. It made me giggle. I really love the idea of him controlling the sand like that. I mean, we all know Gaara can control sand, but we never really think about him controlling FOR another person.
Like I said, very interesting and (shock of all shocks in the Naruto fanfic world) a new NEW idea. That's what I liked about this so much.
That and, "She wondered if he'd take it in a horribly bad way if she asked him to command the damned sand away from her feet."
What a great line.
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 dragondreamer99 2007-05-05 . chapter 1aw, short and sweet, very nice ^^ |