Wow. Your stlye is wonderful and omg, you understand grammar. I loved your story. They way you made Grimmjow both submissive and dominant at the same time. That's hard to do and make it work. And the 1st person point of view was excellent.
It was a nice short story with enough in it that it didin't seem short at all. Keeping the pace while not dragging on for pages is a great skill.
Keep up the good work.

Raicheru

I haven't actually published anything myself, but I'm working on it.

this is pretty good for your first one! :D
i love this pairing to pieces. they r so addictive! :3
anyhoo. great job! i felt sorry for grimmjow at the end and oh, the lemon was hot! X)
keep up the good work (although im not sure whether u r still writing fanfiction since this has been posted a very long time ago). anyways, if u r still writing, keep it up! i enjoyed reading this and i love the way you write ^^

*Squeels* That was awesome! I think you captured Ulquiorra really good and I loved the end :)

i like it seems to be one that yearns to be continued... o;

hehehe but Grimmjow is good on top

That was quite good. I loved it!! One of the best I've read of any Ulquiorra yaoi fanfiction. May you add another chapter?

That was really really good. Very well done, couldn't even tell it was a first. Nice Job, and excellent pairing ^_^

Mm, awesome.

first one, yeah?

Pretty good. At least I thought so.