loved it, thanks

aww, that's a perfect scene! :)

Cuteness all over the page!! I love this story. Thank you for sharing! :)

please continue writing. I loved this. I sequel would be great.

Hi I just read chapter 1 to 20 and I liked it very much,I read all kind of KidFic but I like Stargate the most!!I really hope you write a sequel and this time maybe with a little Jack!!

Thanks for your wonderfull work

down size t ! down size T i cant imagine what he would be like

i love this story plz plz plz keep going and do a sequal

Must say, the best part of this was Jack comforting Daniel. :) Will he reember what happened during that week?

YES YES sequel pleasee!!That was a really great story, Little Daniel was very sweet!!
A sequel with someone other than Daniel... mhh you could switch ,make Jack the litte Kid und Daniel takeing care of him!

New chapter, yeah!
Nice to see Jack still looking after Daniel, although I'll miss little Danny a lot...

Aw... poor Danny! And yes that might be too much of a clifhanger... ;)

I LOVE to see (or read about) Jack interacting w/ kids! I can only imagine that Seeing Dany crying like that would be ripping Jack's heart out!

Oh, I loved the sentence where you say everybody loves Daniel!!
So he'll be big again... what a shame. I hope you make it slow, so we can enjoy him growing up :)

I wonder what the breakthru is?MORE PLEASE!

Heh, I can see this chapter so clearly. Nice descriptions.

great story had me laughing lots ... love the interaction between everyone esp jack and daniel ... cant wait for more so please write soon thanks