I don't know how you don't like this story!! It's awesome! I know how hard it is trying to get the lyrics of a song to match up with your story, 'cuz believe me, I did too, but I think you did a great job!

Hm. I like it, not bad for a first time. Except i think the following things:
Draco's dad abusing him is a little cliche.

You TOTALLY killed the moment by him calling her 'babe'. if a dude called me that, i swear, I'd pop them in the nose.

Anyways, a little cliche..but that's how the the first chapter of The Fine Line was...okay,t he first threew chapters. Good job. :P~Monsy

I really liked this story!! I LOVE The All-American Rejects, and this song isn't one of my 'stand-out' favorites, but I still like it, and it made an AWESOME story.

like the story...will there be more?