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Trallala
2009-12-10 . chapter 1
I would love to read a KakaSaku follow-up, this was absolutely hilarius. This is definetly how I can picture team 7 hitting puberty, poor Kakashi and Asuma ;0)
Gundum M
2009-12-06 . chapter 1
its good if your looking for some light humor
marora
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
This was ** hilarious. Sasuke the ameoba. Someone has to do a follow up fic with ameoba Sasuke.
Emanuel Black
2009-11-22 . chapter 1
It's the best! Love it
gwenstacey
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Oh this made me laugh! I'm the oldest of three girls and I know I've seen that 'dear God what did I do to deserve this!' expression on his face a few times. Its fun to watch it happen to these guys :)
Payce99
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
Oh god, that was freaking hilarious!
TheTinyestOne
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
LMAO, brillant.
Holliequ
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Hilarious from start to finish. I have read this several times over and I'm still laughing. Wonderful work. ^_^
Kakerott
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
this is the funiest story i've ever read, even noe, nearly a year after first printing it, I still loe the story. the only down side is that it was too short. Still, I loved it alot, can't really complain about art, and, this is art.
the grey mage
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
genius.

but to me, naruto would not ask about smuggled oranges, he would grab at them when hungry. oh wait, he knows what boobs are. his sexy jutsu is perfect. huh. maybe he would just start hating himself. cuz he detests perverts.
Moon Ecstasy
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
I ca *hiccup* n't b-b-breath *hiccup* for l-l-laugh *hiccup* ing...
Oh god *inhales sharply*
That was high-freaking-larious!
Excellent work!
Cheers!!
Phlogistics
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
Brilliant! But my favorite part? Sasuke is an angsty amoeba. XD
UpperClassK9
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
I wouldn't mind. this is interesting!
iamnuff
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
hahah.

he naruto and sasuke bits was funnier
BrokenAvenger21
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
I laughed so hard, this was hilarious. Keep up the great work!
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