^^
Lovely.
Update soon =)

This is good. Wirte more and update soon!

But its really powerful. I love it.

It's good so far. Pls update soon

Oh wow, Yanna!
I know I've seen this before, and read a bit, but I was always too lazy to finish it off.
That was AMAZING.
I love apocalypto stories^^
*SQUEES*
Have you read 'Children of the Dust' before? Bea-U-tiful novel! Completely a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!
Aw shucks, just realised I was on this account...
Oh well!
Too lazy to change!
Just update soon or I'm going to bug you all day xD
And you have to write next chapter of 'Breathe in Now'!!
Love.
Akemi-chan

This is certainly very interesting... I like it.

I hope you write more. I really like this! :)

Good start, I didn't notice spelling/grammar errors, you have given enough of the story to pull us in but still leaving us wanting for much more. You have a really good thing here =)