This was hilarious and awsome. I never noticed that toothbrush thing before, but it's great.

omg! that was so funny it was so freakin' hilarous! I thought taht she was atleast picking out clothes! but yah she seems to like her toothbrushes! lolz

Ah haha! That is the most adorable little thing EVER! Haha, you write very well, even if it was a silly story. It was amazing, keep writing.

Elyse aka:flippin sweet Twilight lover

Haha! funny! you know, i actually noticed that while i was reading those books! but you forgot a big one.. you know when she just ate lasagna and she was brushing her teeth to get rid of it? i think it's funny you actually wrote a one-shot about that!