Do the artificial fruits have the same weaknesses as the originals? i believe you mentioned he was trying to remove them. ciao

An excellent fic. Too bad that it hasn't been continued in forever. Really too bad. I've always found the devil fruit powers facinating. I actually don't watch one piece; the main character strikes me as an even bigger idiot than Naruto, and that is a little difficult to swallow. Plus, he looks stupid, though that is my opinion. But that aside, the devil fruits are awesome. There powers range from fairly useless, if interesting, all the way to "can destroy continents given enough time." Logia are the best in my opinion. Semi-immunity to damage, and even without that you have a lot of power. I think that Zoan fruit, most of the time, is the weakest. That isn't to say that certain Zoan fruits don't contain immense power though.

Something tells me that if he uses this around the village, he's going to start running into a LOT more problems.

Nachts

i like the change to how the devil fruits are referred to.

I Love the way you ended that.

i found no {Ovbious} errors... at least none as bad as that.

well, Fillers aren't ALL bad.

i like it!

I like this Sasuke better. ;3

Hey. Just throwing this out there. While it is a form of mental disorder, schizophrenia and Multiple Personality Disorder aren't the same. Schizo is more hallucinations and reality disphoria. MPD is self-explanatory. Just thought you should know. Other than that, you were pretty good with your words.

on youre sixth chapter you sais he was a couple hours late but he was only one

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Hey where the Uchiha Clan symbol

No way in hell Sasuke would be caught dead without it on

Crows, Ravens, jays like Stellar's Jays and Scrub Jays, are all part of the same family and all relatively closely related. Crows and Ravens are two different species, but they are closely related. Raven's are larger, with larger beak relative to their heads and their tail feathers make a triangle as opposed to a curve like a crow's.

Just fyi.

-ZI

Erm... I don't know if it's been said already or not, but a Zoan's voice DOES change, occasionally. Chopper's Heavy Point's voice is MUCH deeper than normal, meaning Naruto's in that case would be, too.

NOOOOOOOO! Plzzz don't stop it was getting soo good T_T