 Blackdex 4/21/12 . chapter 30Do the artificial fruits have the same weaknesses as the originals? i believe you mentioned he was trying to remove them. ciao |
 Impstar 2/8/12 . chapter 30An excellent fic. Too bad that it hasn't been continued in forever. Really too bad. I've always found the devil fruit powers facinating. I actually don't watch one piece; the main character strikes me as an even bigger idiot than Naruto, and that is a little difficult to swallow. Plus, he looks stupid, though that is my opinion. But that aside, the devil fruits are awesome. There powers range from fairly useless, if interesting, all the way to "can destroy continents given enough time." Logia are the best in my opinion. Semi-immunity to damage, and even without that you have a lot of power. I think that Zoan fruit, most of the time, is the weakest. That isn't to say that certain Zoan fruits don't contain immense power though. |
 1000Nachts 1/14/12 . chapter 1Something tells me that if he uses this around the village, he's going to start running into a LOT more problems.
Nachts |
 salamanderzrock 11/25/11 . chapter 14i like the change to how the devil fruits are referred to. |
 salamanderzrock 11/25/11 . chapter 13I Love the way you ended that. |
 salamanderzrock 11/23/11 . chapter 7 i found no {Ovbious} errors... at least none as bad as that. |
 salamanderzrock 11/23/11 . chapter 3well, Fillers aren't ALL bad. |
 salamanderzrock 11/23/11 . chapter 2i like it! |
 Aria Snow 11/20/11 . chapter 7I like this Sasuke better. ;3 |
 the Original Anonymous 9/15/11 . chapter 12Hey. Just throwing this out there. While it is a form of mental disorder, schizophrenia and Multiple Personality Disorder aren't the same. Schizo is more hallucinations and reality disphoria. MPD is self-explanatory. Just thought you should know. Other than that, you were pretty good with your words. |
 pizzaman1200 6/4/11 . chapter 4on youre sixth chapter you sais he was a couple hours late but he was only one
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 Anon 5/29/11 . chapter 28 Hey where the Uchiha Clan symbol
No way in hell Sasuke would be caught dead without it on |
 Zaion Indulias 11/14/10 . chapter 26Crows, Ravens, jays like Stellar's Jays and Scrub Jays, are all part of the same family and all relatively closely related. Crows and Ravens are two different species, but they are closely related. Raven's are larger, with larger beak relative to their heads and their tail feathers make a triangle as opposed to a curve like a crow's.
Just fyi.
-ZI |
 RamzaAion 11/1/10 . chapter 1Erm... I don't know if it's been said already or not, but a Zoan's voice DOES change, occasionally. Chopper's Heavy Point's voice is MUCH deeper than normal, meaning Naruto's in that case would be, too. |
 jacalman 10/14/10 . chapter 30NOOOOOOOO! Plzzz don't stop it was getting soo good T_T |