Interesting dream. It makes you think and put things together, but at the same time isn't so jumpy as to confuse you (though I suppose it would if you didn't know WHR very well). It's very much one of those few 'I like it, I don't know why, but I like it' type of stories, which for me are the hidden treasures out there.

Kinda confusing, it makes your brain work. it`s cool, not so many stories confuse you in a good way

I like your story. It's interesting how you used fairy tales in conection with Robin. I can't say I've seen anyone do that before with fanfics or at least not whr fanfics. Good job.
I hope you write more stories soon.