very good, keep it coming

This is AMAZING I love it! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more! Great job!

Yaay! You're writting more! That's good. This really has an authentic "OVA" feel too it. You must keep working on it. The chacters for "the heavens" is "tenjou" (“V

Is the hooded man lloyd! huh! huh! *jumps up in down* in either case, great chapter- and I hope you get another part out soon! WHOOOOO HOOOOOO! *waves banners*

*poings around the room* The Hooded man is Llyod isn't he? You can't keep me waiting! Where's Rouge and James, eh? Eh? EH? I liked them, you can't stop now!

This is cool! I like it! Great job! _