Very cute! :)

Haha! Loved it! Is there a sequel to what Oliver says to her afterwards? If not, you should make one!! :D It was really good! :D

this is utterly ADORABLE. +faved.

Hahaha, I like where Oliver cut her off in her dream. :P The plot is HILARIOUS. I slightly wished Oliver would've watched on; at least the rest of the team wasn't there! I like the end. I hope they found out.

I find it strange how FF authors make sex in teen age seem so normal :P

o.. poor katie that she was laughed at.. but happy ending!! =) =) yay!

Cute!!
Wow! This three shot is really great...
May I translate into German??
Love
sweet peach

Adorable!

OMG That was so cute! Well...the end wasn't as good as the rest, but, whatever. I LOVE THIS FIC! :P

Oh wow, I've got to say that I found this to be a very amusing story. I ADORED how you wrote Katie, I think that it was perfect. Oliver was so-so for me; though it was fun to see him react that way, I never could picture Oliver actually doing so. Either way, it was very fun to read. Oh, those twins. How can you not love them? Even when they've been turned into little slugs (possibly my favourite part).

Haha, Katie actually SLEPT during Oliver's early morning pep talks? That's brilliant!

Fred and George were turned into weird, sluggy things? Omg, that's evil, just so MEAN! Why couldn't Katie use her amazing hexing powers to get at a Slytherin or someone who actually bugs her? Fred and George are just...pranksters. They aren't THAT mean to Katie.
...ok, I'm done with the crazy rant thing.

Still very hilarious and awesomely great story, and just...yeah, you rock my socks!

*bangs head on wall*

I SWEAR, I REVIEWED THIS THING BEFORE!

*calms down*

Ok, on to the review, since I didn't leave one before:

Love your writing, and KBOW, so this is automatically great. Katie is a fun character, and Oliver is a Quidditch Nazi. Put them together, and you've got a handful.

(Katie Bell was a girl of many talents.

She could stay on a bucking broom fifty feet in the air, and she could spell out almost any word you needed.

She could recite the lyrics of literally hundreds of songs at the drop of a hat, and she could most certainly talk the leg off a wooden table.

But one thing she was not good at was staying awake through their Captain’s early morning marathon pep talks... and for that, she dearly paid.)

For reasons unknown, I thought the above passage incredibly funny.



Anyways, love this story, and off to read the next chapters!

Not a really good or productive review, but I've got a terrible cold and it's hard to be intelligent with a mind-numbing cold. You should already know you rock so this stupid review shouldn't make you feel bad.

That was hilarious, and so cute. Wonderful writing too, good job!

BIE

damn good thing you posted it.

omg that was too cute. i mean really, too cute. and the title of the whole thing fits in perfectly. i mean really it does.

this is such a fantastic story it totally makes my day. actually my week because ive had such a terrible one. dont even mention school to me. its such an issue at the moment and i am freaking out about it.

but awesome job as always.
lots o love!

OMG NO! NOT FRED! whyn does he have to turn into a slug?! why not just george!? its not like HE'S important!
...ok, im done

"Katie could not get any more sense out of him, but she felt her stomach drop as she realised what must have happened."
~before this i was sitting through the story with the usual smile (becasue theyre so damn great) but once this sentence ended my smile completely fell. yes, in the cliched way, but it did. so feeling katies pain right now. well, not exactly cause half of that will never ever ever ever happen to me (especially about the part of jumping oliver) but still. i can relate.

fantasic once again as always

lots o love!

omg, how did i not know about this story. seriously. im dissappointed in myself for not finding this sooner. gods im an idiot sometimes.

but yeah, have you noticed the similarities in our writing? cause i have. seriously, like seriously seriously, i started a story that listed off katie's talents. they werent the exact same ones but the idea was the same. and yellow sundress, in sunday best katie was wearing a yellow sundress. i cant remember who posted what first but i swear i have never seen this story before. its prob cause the alert got lost in the black hole is currently causing. i hate it when the systems down.

ok, back to the brilliance of this whole story...girl, you have got to stop giving me perfect reasons to hunt oliver down over in fiji and bring him back here. his vacation has been long enough.

but this story is totally brilliant so far. i love how you transition to the daydreams fluidly and how for a second youre wondering if daydream-oliver is angry-captain-oliver. it really is brilliant. and the normal font vs. italics is so easy on the eye it makes me smile.

really hoping you get this sooner than later
lots o love!