I loved this fic, even though I prefer RaphDon. But as long as it is written well, like this one, then I can read both MikeyDon and RaphLeo ^^
Well done!

^.^

oh yea?God that's weird,for the originally official set indicates R's way more taller than other 3 bros of his.well,did u say it's on the movie2007 DVD?well maybe the jungle boy grew.=[] which only added more weirdnesses.
BTW,failed to see ur pics,http://i27?

really?0[]o
1 inch taller?
dude,that must be said by leo himself LOL!unofficial official LOL!
as far as i kno,raph is the most taller and bulker turtle among them.XD
but 's ok,leo suffers paranoia,u kno,LOL.it doesnt' affect ur fic a bit,it's still rock!

yeah,ye r good,im totally into ur style,i mean,the way of RL&MD and even RD,dude,XD,the RD's 's's just righteous!u kno wut having viewed all the 4 of ur tmnt chapts,i kinda think"wow,'s really that way the dude wrote.","no wonder L&R they always stick togther in tasks.","and THAT explained why sometimes leo sent R with M,and sometimes they seem don't get alone so well..." when i go over the toons again,that's ALL make sense now.XD
BTW,i have one point left to say in the previous comment,also the one i wanna ask u...er,leo's a li'l taller than raph?

dude,i m psychoed for ur JL community,really,really,for,even if i'd tried millions of proxies to access without fruit.0xo
the very 1min be4 i just tried some again...nothing changes.

duude,my worship,u got mine!hero!
they really made me LOL!they really made my day!

thoes RL&DM things r just too obvious and natrual to ignore u kno,;)

but im pretty curious 'bout the way they sex it up,for turtles...u kno,it said that turtles' dicks r right in their tails,0xo
and whatever the whole mutant thing their fingers r just way too gaint to plug into their...uhm...there.o_o
how can leo stand that anyway...dude.
and i doubt if they can do the personized style,u kno,they have shell on their backs,it'd be inconvinient...
and most importantly,hem,never had i seen their tails,by the way, where r they?-x=
is it anything to do with their mutant bodies?
why they just didn't give them each a tail anyway!...babble

no offence,im just a junior curious 'bout turtle sex...i love ur fic.:)

wow! i thought this fic was...was...great!! awsome!! sweet!! AND...A BIT HORNY...BUT I LOVED IT..WRITE MORE!

Hm, this was the first Turtles slash I ever read and I thought the way you wrote Don/Mikey they were so perfectly matched and so I checked out all the other stories in this section, looking for that pairing and alas, there were none. :-(

So, you might not want to consider writing a sequel ... like, please?
Pretty pretty please with pizza and almond cream on top?

omg i loved this!! loved how each chapter came from the pov of one brother than the other to form one coherant story! i especially loved how mikey was protrayed and how he would do anything to help his brothers...especially donnie.

and because of this, i hope you plan of writing something with don and mikey...especially about that last comment from don, how if it were mikey, he would fight for him.

great story. i saw it on the twincest forum, but never got to reading it...but now that i have, im craving more from you! so step up and WRITE!

Tri

Dude! Make a sequel! Please? *Mikey puppy eyes* Like, Leo forgiving Raph, or a Mikey/Don one? That would be really nice ^^;

Wah after seeing a picture on 4 chan i had to find some decent TMNT fanfiction and theres not a lot out there and you topped the list on well written and entertainment, a little more smut would be appreciated still i loved it :D

I came looking for a slashy turtle fic and stumbled upon this jewel and -- oh my! Simply wonderful! Alright, let me try to be a bit more constructive . . .

First off, the characters are amazingly true to form -- at least how I see the turtles. You have each of the 4 down and they talk and act as I would expect them to. Leo the defunct leader who tries so hard but in it misses small things around him, Mikey who will do anything to make his beloved brothers happy and keep his family together, and Donnie who kinda drifts between the other 3 and can't seem to measure up. Your Raphael is seemingly a jerk so far (as he should be), but I can tell something is going on beneath the surface -- I'm quite eager to find out what. :) The dialouge is very real, believable, and honest. The turtle-smut -- you tackled that very tastefully and well what with the difficulties of writing mutant turtles having sex and whoa! -- very nice! The story is not plot-heavy, but it shouldn't be as it seems more like a character study to me -- and a good one at that. The inter-relationships and love between the 4 shine through, even with the mess they have gotten into, and you have their universe and voices down so well.

Only recommendation would be to watch out when proof-reading -- I noticed a few homophone mistakes and some typo/ spelling goofs. I would be more than happy to beta for you, if you would like -- just drop me a line.

Whew - sorry, didn't mean to write you an essay here! I'm looking forward to Raphael's POV. Thank you for the excellent read.

~Onlystarchild

Well, I found this story off-chance, and have been hooked since the beginning. I honestly thought that the last chapter was all there was!

I can't wait to see the last chapter, you've been writing them exceptionally well! And the sex-scenes weren't that badly written either. I think you're writing the characters as canon as can be for this type of genre.

Really, you're doing wonderful! Can't wait to read more!

I just had to comment on this and say that I love it. We're all seriously lacking in the Turtles slash department and there's nothing better than finding one that's well written and just all around awesome. I can't wait to read more! :3

We get more of this, right? Great writing/and/ characterisation - something which is hard to come by. I really enjoyed this - poor Donny, though!

You left some interesting points in there too, I must agree with paulafromtwoson!

I've noted from somewhere else (heh heh) that this'll be different POVs - so there /is/ more? Can't wait!