I think I burst my gut reading this. It hurts so bad. But it was so good! xD

*snickers* Jazz is diabolical but i absolutely LOVE that line about the wins and the police haha XD

Wow that was fascinating - and really well written - and, to top it all off, incredibly hot! Amusing, touching, delightful characterization of Jazz and Prowl and actually of all the Autobots (which is praise indeed coming from a pretty much committed Decepticon-phile...). Your simple but highly descriptive and provocative style gave me many emotional and physical sensations! It's food for thought - as with all of your stories which I have so far read - and this one made me consider the nature of sensuality and sexuality... But above all else it was superb entertainment. Another job well done!

omg! I just died laughing! wait! i'm still alive.. for now lol. great oneshot. i loved it.

HAHAHAHA he's evil! WOOHO go Jazzman!

Oh Jazz... naughty naughty! Prowl's gonna have to punish you!

ROFL!! I think I may have busted something trying to hold my laughter in... ow...

LOL...you'd think they were in church or something..totally adorable XD

Bwahahaha, you are evil. THIS is so deliciously, wonderfully evil. Poor, poor Prowl. You write the two of them so absolutely perfect.

a wonderful story.

i absolutely loved how you described
the famous 'bondmate' term in this story,
showing what it was all about.

and showing some 'graphic' tf love

but i like alot of things.

i love it.

~death

you going to write a second chapter??!! PLEASLE! I beg of thee! Tis be a lonely ngiht of suffering without it! Please please please! and Thank you! x3

~ Kaekokat

Jazz Jazz Jazz...I hope you got what you deserve. And then some.

Laughed my ** off, just because I love your Jazz.

Nightwind, where have you been hiding this one??

I was laughing as soon as the 12 minute comment came up. I had an idea of what was about to transpire but I still wasn't ready for that. Absolutely hilarious. And kinda hot too :)

A great little fic. I did find something to nitpick, however. This sentence:
"I leaned forward as I did so, resting both elbows on my knees, and stared even more intensely at my mate, He, meanwhile, continued to look anywhere else but at me."

Did the period run away and the comma just decided to take it's place, or what?

Other than that, I really liked the story. ^_^

You've got my attention. Now keep at it!

Jazz, a victim of his own sexiness. It's great.

Something strikes me, now that I think on it: it is a rare thing to not notice any spelling or grammar issues in a work of fan fiction. Good work.