Hehe, this is such a cute story! Prowl is utterly evil XD

I adore this!
you write Prowl an excellent tease

This was such an insane tease! (but in a good way)
hope to see it continue somewhere

aw poor dazz never did get a hug... hahaha

Awesome!! Is there a sequel?

How horrible. Prowl was just cruel. Are you going to write a sequel?

oh cruel! prowl that was cruel! are you going to maek a sequel out of this?

Oh, that was awesome - it really made me grin. I like your devious Prowl a great deal, and Jazz's voice throughout was very entertaining.

AHAHAHAH!

Prowl is such a playing-hard-to-get b@$tard! lol This was adorable. Jazz is so flamboyant.

Heeheehee, very, very hilarious, and totally sweet ^_^ Loved Jazz's characterization.

Lovely lovely lovely~XDXDD!!
That's what I call opposite attract XD!
*ran to my desk 'n start drawing JP again...XDD*
I love all your stories >w/

-hugs Jazz-
:)
This was adorably funny, obviously.
You should write more. Like this.

" "Optimus is always up for a hug, you know," I announce nastily over my shoulder as the door starts to slide open. "
*rolls around laughing* That is hilarious!

This story is why I love Jazz and Prowl. They are so perfect for each other, especially when they're pushing each other's buttons, and you portray that perfectly.

I'm don't really see the slash between Jazz and Prowl but I did enjoy the way you narrate Jazz, it's pretty good. And I also enjoyed the phrase "earth-shatteringly erotic".