i read the alchemist but i can't remember the author. it a good book to read. ^^

Haha, it's always the quiet ones, isn't it ^_^ What an ending to the chapter! I really, really want to see what happens next!

I think I've got this figured out... Is it that Mikey was pushed into that well by someone/something and that person/thing has now taken his place? Oh! Scary stuff!

OO; what the heck is wrong with Mikey?! Something's wrong! That much I can already sense! That glint, his nonchalant personality! And the creature and accidents! What the heck is going on with him?!

And ok so Leo fell in the shower, but was actually in the tub and the creature did that! Somehow the creature did that@! And what the heck is that things problem anyways?! What doesn't Leo know! And when he figures it out, what will that mean for this creature?!

Ack! I don't know! So many questions. At the same time this is going on, I know Leo is probably the one who met the girl in the previous chapter...but I just can't help feeling that it could be Mikey as well! That somehow when they got seperated something happened to him and...I don't know!

Nice! Man this is interesting. Hmm ok so from hints dropped I can see it either being Raph cause of the motorcycle or Leo because of the names. Or perhaps it's one of them and they are merely remembering something. Like for Raph his motorcycle and the name of his brother. Or Leo, the letters in his name and the motorcycles hum from Raph. Also for some reason when you talked about stories, I started wondering about Mikey. Anyways this is an excellant story, premise!

Good story :) plese continue soon

Hm...very, very interesting... I like it. I am at a loss for which turtle it could be though (darn, I hate it when I'm clueless). There were clues (that I picked up on) to three of the turtles...unless you are so devious to create a random turtle that has nothing to do with our guys (yet)... Oh the possibilities!
And also; what the heck happened to him!? Lying in a well with rats? Out for a day? Amnesia? Hmm... Gorsh, I'm like completely clueless to this whole thing!
I have to say I like Marcella. She's odd but kind and wise. Can't wait to see what complications she'll be able to bring to the story. Bwahahahaha...
I like this (even if I am completely and utterly clueless)!
This is absolutely fantabulous!
I cannot wait for more and can't wait to be unconfused (yay for understanding)!

Hm...interesting start, I'm still trying to deceide if it's Raph, Mikey, or Leo. Leo because of when you mentioned the alphabet game and how the letter's L and O seemed familiar. And then I was thinking that maybe it's Mikey from when you mentioned the name 'Sameer' and it's meaning. It really got me to thinking "Mikey because of his creative imagination". And then I started leaning more towards Raph because of the mention of the motorcycle.

So, you have definitely got my interest peaked. One because I want to know exactly which one of the guys it is. Two, because I want to see if your going to continue with the character 'Marcella', and if so how she is going to play a part in the plot. I kinda get the feeling that there is going to be more to her then the little that was mentioned. And thirdly, I want to know what happend to ? turtle for them to end up in the situation that they are in.

I'm really glad to see you posting something, and as always I will be looking for updates from this story as well as some of your others.

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