This was amazing, too. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed this. I love the points of view writing as well. I remember reading the earlier piece and enjoying that too.

Thanks, this was a great companion piece to Inequal Expressions. Again, I enjoyed the different perspectives of the characters for the same conversation. Great job. I look forward to more from you.

-Gib-

Very nicely done.

I liked this one a lot. You caught both men pondering their changing relationship and grateful for the changes. Nice work.

yay! had been waiting for this one. nice follow up

cant wait for ur next story

happy writing!

post quick

Nicely done!

That was awesome! I loved that you did a POV from each brother's perspective. I can see a scene like that playing out the show - very in character. :)

Fab, as usual. I love the way you get right inside both men's heads. Don's guarded protectiveness and Charlie's latent realisation. I enjoy these retro stories. Such a lot of troubled water yet to bridge. Really nicely written, yet again. Thank you.

Uh... HOW exactly did Charlie "fail" Don? By not reading his mind during a short phone call while they were thousands of miles apart?

Nice to see both men's POV.

Enjoyable.

That was lovely, the perfect follow up. Thank you!

nicely written

This is great, I love that you have both points of view. Also you have their language down pat, I can totally hear Don saying, “Yeah? Well, so am I.”