(ROFL with Vaati) AWESOME!
Vaati: (Realizes he just got sealed up) DAMN IT!
(Facepalms self) Dude, calm the frig down. Goddesses you have anger management issues, Wind Boy.
Vaati: Look who's talking.
ME!
Vaati: (Shakes head in disgrace)

YAY VAATI! I was so sad when he was getting choked. If that bastard killed him I was going to scream. WE NEED TO TAKE GANONPORK OUT SO VAATI CAN BE THE MOST POWERFUL LOZ BADASS BADGUY!

Sir Dominik is the classic elder.
I only have one word for you.
WHAT?
8D

ROFL DARK LINK WAS HILLARIOUS! He pawns, man, just pawns. My BFF is madly in love with Dark. I made the mistake of calling him a copy and she beat the shit out of me...who's going to pop up next, Veran? (Five chapters later) HOLY SHIT IT'S VERAN!
^_^" I had to.
ANYWAY...wow Link, that was quick. I thought I taught you how to drown out those hullicinations! (Is somewhat insane)
Vaati: (Bangs head on table)
Umm...?
Vaati: Gary mother fucking Oak.
You and Pokemon, goddesses...
Lol the twitch.

Okay so far I love this. When I read Gufuu-as in "Gufuu"-I knew he was my favorite badass Minish! ANYWAY, I cringed almost every sentence Vaati said. He is just pure kickass and I found myself saying that while reading his lines. During the Gerudo fight when Link said "oh shit" I said the same thing aloud before reading his dialogue. And I was just coughing from laughing so hard at the part about shadows. Twilight Princess much? Yay for Vaati planning! He's finally learned his mistakes. Lol when Brodrick-BROCK-pulled her up and was saying that stuff I pictured him going into one of those corny songs and dancing. (Pumps fist in air and screams yes repeatedly) GREAT NOW I CAN HAVE LINK! Sorry Midna but you get him in TP. ;) Oh thank Din I don't have to face my friend's wrath now. I was afraid I'd be stuck with Wind Boy.
Vaati: WOULD YOU STOP CALLING ME THAT?
NEVER! (Runs away from Vaati's wrath)
Um I promise not to throw a wine bottle under two conditions.
1. I get Link. ;)
2. You don't kill me when I announce that I cut Vaati's hair.
Vaati: You ruined me, Hytwilian.
Well I didn't want you to catch on fire during the Campfire Song Song!
I can't promise Vaati won't throw something at you if he fails...

Well, at least Vaati didn't die, but...GRR! Vaati! Why didn't you teleport farther?! At least to , like, minish woods, or something! *sigh* Anyways, great story. I really enjoyed it.

Yay for ZeLink, I guess. I'm ok with the pairing, but I prefer VaatiZelda. No, i'm not dissing your story because of a pairing, lol. It was there from the start. But Vaati was funny! He was like a little kid, kind of. hahaha...

Yay! But what will happen to Vaati? He won't die, will he?

Vaati made some new friends! Are they still gonna kill him for killing the king guy? *whimper* Don't kill Vaati! He's kinda good now! And even if he wasn't good, he's adorable!

Aww, poor Vaati! Ganon won't kill him, will he? It was funny at the beginning
“Vaati is about to do something incredibly stupid.”

I was like LMAO when I read that!

I could understand your crush on Gufuu, but Vaati? I mean seriously, he is such a wuss. always hiding behind magic and stuff. the only thing he ever actually did for himself was win the swordsmanship competition thingy at the beginning of Minish Cap! and I know he cheated on that thing. or at least he would have had to if I was in it . . .
Another great story! but I must admit I like the one where Evan isn't actually Vaati better.

I'm glad she's the Queen now, but can't she just fire Faruch?

Oh! I hate Faruch!

Lol, since I'm a moron who lost track of time, don't read this review for...3 days I think.

Anyway, Happy birthday, since I'm hoping you paid attention and waited three days XP

Congratulations on finishing your story! It was fun, and I'm glad you didn't kill Vaati too. Lulz, Zelda using the Four Sword, that's a side that I sadly never thought of, and would like to applaud you for, it was a brilliant move.

Hope you write more LoZ stories, I can't wait to see what other stuff you do.

Post it tomorrow. That way I can tell you happy birthday.

Yay! You didn't kill off Vaati! At least, not yet anyway.

Kekekeke *annoying singsong voice* Ganon got stabbed by the Master Sword again. Ganon got stabbed by the Master Sword again!

Lol, before I fixed it, I had two typos in both 'Master Sword's in the EXACT SAME PLACES. CURSE YOU WHATEVER MAKES ME...TYPE...TYPOS!

Oh wait. That would be my fingers.

Damn.