Oww that was incredibly cute - even though I can't see Hiruma bying a huge teddy bear for Mamori, nor walking in the street with it in his arms. Must be funny, though !-

lol! Very, very cute. Exactly who were they planning on "giving" that teddy bear to?

Man, the shopkeeper should consider himself lucky that his shop was only burglarized...

That's pretty funny! Now, why were they getting a teddy in the first place?

Aww! Cute! Wonder why I never noticed this before...?

Aww. That was cute. I like your style of writing. Great job!

it was a really sweet story..

keep up a good work!

Actually, I didn't understand why they had to buy the teddy bear, but that last two paragraphs cracked me up. XD

This was really good!

~Jess

adorable! This was great, very dynamic, you write the characters well-and it's so cute.

cute lol i though that hiruma would go to bild a bear workshop and make a bear holding m16's and pistols lol hurry and update!!

good one shot. ne is it?
keep up writing though!
I highly encourage you!

Ah, these two really are...sneaky, perhaps? It's hard to describe her as sneaky, and yet...

Jun Jun's Magical Teddyland! Adorable!

It's been years since i last entered this site and this is the first EyeShield21 Fic that i've come across and I LOVE IT! Nice work done here, the characters were carefully put together yet the message was delivered ^_~ (wink!). Good job, well done!

Nicely done! Not only did you keep them in character, but the whole story and premise was just so lovely and so... HiruMamo like. @_@ Lol! Definitely faving this. ^^ Keep writing!