Haha, loved it! It was cute, and the image of Mori bent in half while Hunny's kissing him IS pretty fun... Also, loved the end... I can really imagine the twins betting on that, lol
~Becca

KAWAII!

That's hilariously hawt. X3

SQUEE! >_< Yes!

I loved the whole fierce kiss, and the funny ending...

Great job!!

that was well written .kyouya's verble usage was good ,reflecting his personality.do another

Nice! Cool story!

AH! AH! AH!
Do you have ANY idea how hard it is to find MoriHoney? And there it is, all of a sudden, your story, rising in the distance like a new sun. . . . *sighs as she waxes poetical*

Ahem. Good story. More HoneyMori please?

That was cute.

*giggles* The twins WOULD bet over the romance of fellow members, wouldn't they?

This is good! I don't really get it BUT YOU HAVE TO add some more to it. Even if you say it's complete -glares- lol