i luved it! please hurry up and write another chapter. you wrote leoben's personality well.

Athena

I liked this very much. As I said in another review, more Leoben stories should be written.

i really liked this story. got me into leoben's head in an interesting way. and i liked your take on what may have happened in the tent in LDYBII, cos you would have thought that leoben would have just killed any rivals for kara's affections then and there.

this story really made me think and i like that.

very good work.

Really enjoyed this! Great job!

Good job. I love this deeper look into Leoban's character. I've been fascinated by him since he and Kara first met. Thanks for posting this and I hope there'll be more.

-Ellie