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justareader7883
2009-11-29 . chapter 77
So I am completely in love with this story but it is almost completely obvious that you are not going to finish it so I'll fill in what I would like. Harry wakes up, he and Sev finally have sex and bond (hopefully in great detail :) ), Harry finally kills Voldy and they live happily ever after. That being said I believe you could write it so much better. I do hope you one day decide to do so. In that hope I will of course add you to my update list. Maybe you are just trying to write responses to the 11,0 reviews and are a bit behind! :)
Ellariayn20
2009-11-29 . chapter 77
Dear Josephine Darcy,

I love your story! It is one of the most well written stories I have read on fanfiction. I can't describe it exactly, but your writing is amazing. I saw you comment about fixing your grammar and spelling mistakes. Don't worry too much about it, I've seen plenty of stories that have much worse problem than that; such as developing the characters or anything. Some of those stories are so bad. I read a ton, and since it's my favorite thing to do in my free time (sometimes I create my own free time so I can read) I tend to be picky about the stories I read on fanfiction. I read a lot of professional work normally, (real books) and It gets on my nerves, but then again, I can't complain too much, because I'm not good at writing a story either. On a completely different note, I was wondering why you haven't updated your story since '08. Not that it's my business to pry into your life, but there are a TON of reviews, and a lot of these are probably because of this reason. You might have a very valid reason and just not want to share it, which is perfectly fine, but I believe that most people including me would like to know if you're planning on ever returning to your story, or if you've abandoned it. If you could let me know, I would be more than grateful to you. I am in awe of your writing skill with this story. Hope that you finish it. Thanks for posting it.

A question. Why did you choose Severous to be the one Harry connects to on a romantic and emotional level (if that's even true)? Not that I find anything wrong with it, I'm just curious. I find it extremely interesting hoe you've interwoven all of the characters, and given some valid points to a lot of different relationships. I especially like Charlie and Draco. I really like the way that whole thing played out. I know you probably can't find a ton of time to reply to this whole gigantic thing, but I've got nothing else to do, and I want to talk about it. I have a good friend who also reads a lot of fanfiction, and reads a lot of the same material as I do, but has a completely different taste for genres. She has recommended stories that have horrible writing styles, but a good plot-like the idea was good, but their way of putting it on paper ruined it kind if thing. She likes a lot of those, and I don't really know why. It's funny, because she is much more picky about books in general. (Sorry for rambling, or getting off topic, or both since that's very possible) She hates the classics, which I don't mind, but they drive her insane. I knew the quote that Arthur said to Charlie was familiar, but I didn't really take notice. I saw another AN where you said some other people had noticed more Jane Austin (?) Stuff in your writing. Wondering what that was exactly.

Okay I'll stop writing here. No need to send me a lengthy reply. Uh uh!

PS - Have you ever gotten a review that used up all 10 characters, or do you not know. I fell bad for you if that has happened.

Ellariayn20
Evangelynn
2009-11-28 . chapter 77
Please don't give up on this story. I love it. Can't wait to see Harry wake up.
crystal-riot
2009-11-28 . chapter 9
i could read your authors noted alone and love this story lol. i loved the bit about the rings in the right hand. i didnt know that so thanks for enlightening me.
crystal-riot
2009-11-28 . chapter 5
wow. this story is really good. its kinda weird though cause i usually dont read such LONG stories. and boy is this one long. well. im off to read more of this great story!
crystal-riot
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
wow. this first chapter is very interesting. i like it a lot. i must admit that i think this is going to be a great story judging by the reviews.
sllimeimmat
2009-11-26 . chapter 77
I know you must get this all the time, but please sign in and let us know that you are still alive...I am beginning to assume that you aren't!
I love this story and have followed it since not long after you started writing it and feel upset each time I check up on it as there are no longer any new chapters!
After having just reread the story for the fifth time, I just thought I'd write to let you know how much I love this story and want to know what is going to happen next.
Hope all is going well in your life and that it you find some time to write and put all your fans out of their misery!
EvilAngelBB
2009-11-25 . chapter 77
I've already reviewed once I think...doesnt matter really...are you ever planning on finishing this story? Cuz really, Harry deserves a happy ending and he cant get that if this story never has an ending! Seriously, I love this story and I really really really want to see where this ends up so please hurry up and post some updates! You've had enough time! :( If you're posting elsewhere besides here and hpfandom, let me know so I can read more! If its reviews you want as a bribe, I'll go through and review every chapter that I haven't already done. Please please please update! At the very least, could you email me at BBDCID9889 @ aol (dot) com I'd like to hear from you. THANKS!
Gizenshi
2009-11-24 . chapter 77
Thank you for writing this story! It did start with a cliche, but the characters barely went ooc, the writing very good and the storyline has been amazing and captivating. I'm still not sure about the whole King thing - but I guess that's just me being biased from from other fics, where Harry being ridiculously overpowered is farfetched. In your story it is justified.

I hope your life is going well and that you continue writing! I'll be looking forward to updates :)
Iconic
2009-11-23 . chapter 44
I'm glad things "worked out" between Harry an Snape- nothing like dragging out the angst and mis communication until it causes irreparable damage...I really do like when in a story, the characters can actually talk things out and resolve their issues. Again, I am reading late into the night but I am just so addicted to this incredibly well written, well thought out story that I just can't stop! On to do some more reading then...
Iconic
2009-11-23 . chapter 9
I want to start off telling you how amazing this story is- I literally cannot tear myself away from it! I liked the authors note that you added at the end of this chapter. It is really good to see that you put thought into developing your plot and add the little subtleties that will make a bigger difference latter on. I think it is Ironic that this chapter you are discussing left vs. right hands. I just covered that topic in one of my history lessons...anyway, I thought I might add to the point that the right hand is "dexter" and so the term "ambidextrous" referring to the ability to right with either hand means "two right hands". Interesting? It's also interesting to note that in most images of Eve (Christianity)the apple of sin is in her left hand...
I will continue reading now because this story is amazing!
Holly Tree
2009-11-22 . chapter 1
PLEASE update! we really miss you 0_0,
qnofserenity
2009-11-21 . chapter 77
I really enjoy this story. It has a lot going for it. It's very sorrowful/disturbing to see such a wonderful story sitting here and no activity. Please update if you can or drop a message. It took a lot of time and effort for you to write these wonderful plots. Don't forget you're loyal readers and update soon.
LadyXBlueXBullet
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
Allow me a moment to be blunt...are you dead? I realise life can get in the way of things or perhaps you are suffering from writers block? However it is nice to see even a note as to why there has been no updates in two years, because we, your readers, truly enjoy your fanfiction and wish to see more of this excellently well written work.

So please if you can, just inform us as to whether you will continue or as to why you cannot, it would be greatly apperciated. Thank you.

~Lady Blue :)

P.s. I do not intend to sound rude or come off rude and if I do so I am truly sorry. Really.
faith bonksie
2009-11-18 . chapter 77
AH!! Dont stop there!! This is bloody fantastic!!
Please continue soon I cant wait until Harry wakes up!
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