Lucky **! Whenever I beat up people for my friends, my mum cries.

D : I JUST REALIZED YOU CALLED ME STUPID.

TRANSLATION FOR THE 'MIA'S' OF THE WORLD: Yo. I made another short chaper and I'm sorry.

ITS DUMBLEDORE!

Wow I'm only on the second chapter and it is going so strangely that my mind is turning into gobbldy-**

hiya mashes!I love the story so far...but my only critism is that you switch view points constantly and that confuses me...I don't know...I just can't follow that good cause it confuses me...ohwell I'll get over it :P

ek!I like it!mashes.but I'm still sad I 'm not in it.(wink wink)(nudge nudge).maybe just a minor role.like random person in the back ground...or delivery person.or a broom named angele...I don't know.just something.oh I know.all powerful muffin ruler of the universe.yeah.that suits me perfectly...

cudos...cudos to you.unless it spelled cutos.I ponder...

Squee! This is gonna be so awesome, I know it!

Muahahaha.
you captured meh perfectly.xD

I'm a bit confused, is she still saying what she thinks or just adding second thoughts after half of what she says?

Good chapter ^^ Their argument made sense and felt realistic.

Keep up the good work! =D

blech.

-bites you-

to lovey.xD
Jk.Cute,i liked it.

0.0

omg that was awesome! I totally love the whole story, and especially the everyone-can-hear-her-thoughts thing, that was pulled off very well! Great job, I can't wait for the sequels!

Ok.I was only joking about the ** thing.
But still!
You didnt TELL me..

Oh and by the way.

NUU REMMY!Dont die!I LOVES YOU AND YOUR HOT LIPS!"
xD

You **!
Your kicking meh out the fic?!
-sobsob-DONTA