 hopeh-wa 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Omgsh. Pay-per-view porn. You are utterly genius, m'dear.
...I can has some of them pancakes?
So yes, this was like the pairing perfectly portrayed and epitomized. I am favoriting it, obviously. And I envy your MAD SKILLZ.
--Hope |
 Siehorse 2007-11-22 . chapter 1Lol. So cute.
So, I didn't really understand the whole situation, but I got the point. ;-)
Mind adding another chapter or making a sequel? |
 XxRibbons and LacexX 2007-05-11 . chapter 1I loved it! It was so good please write more KairiXAxel fanfiction ^_^ Axel's character was perfectly portrayed and the same with Kairi! |
 malu kuku 2007-05-04 . chapter 1 JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA! XD This was AMAZING >w |
 Zanisha 2007-04-20 . chapter 1ROFL.
And I didn't read this earlier because I FAIL. D:
But seriously. Your sense of humour is pure lulz. AND IT KICKS ASS. >:D It's awesome to see Axel/Kairi without a ton of OMG ANGST, and and and... you're just so awesome. XD;
Plus the whole pay-per-view porn thing just about killed me dead. XDXDXD.
So in conclusion,
you own. ♥ |
 Constance Greene 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Aw. XD Ohmygosh this was so amusing. And entertaining.
A KairiAxel, I think? Mm. ♥
I love the writing. It flowed and was an easy read. And just plain humorous, too. At first I was a little confused with the situation, but then it got better.
"all she ever watched was pay-per-view porn"
LMAO. And then Roxas... oh dear. Those kids.
I liked how Kairi was Axel's personal cook. I can see her like that. And the way you wrote as them! Their personalities! I loved them. Kairi had some spunk and Axel was adorable yet still bouncily up to no good. And the suggestions were oh-so enjoyable.
Favouriting~ ♥
.x. Constance. |
 pretty-r.a.v.e-GIRLxx 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Aw! That was cute! ^^ |