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| SxStrngSamurai13 2008-07-18 ch 2,  | abuseGreat chapter, and I really like how you wrote Kitsune and you really managed to get a depressing tone for the chapter. Interesting chapter and I can't wait till the next chapter to see what develops between those two. |
| Tart 2008-06-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome... |
| Xoroth 2008-06-11 ch 2, | abuseInteresting story, well written. |
| Shinzochi 2008-06-11 ch 2, | abuseThat was GREAT, I will be looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
| motorized-sasquatch 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseIt seems like there has been a growing quanitity of KeixKit stories in the past months. Thankfully, this is one of the better ones. |
| Keikun4283 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. Almost forgot about this fic though so I just reread the first chapter to get caught back up. Well it looks like she's trying to get with him now mostly so I hope you update this again soon. |
| Sentiment Remains 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseNice an update welcome back! Anyways I'm loving it so far...please update soon!! |
| Michael222 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, I really didn't like the abusive language. Second of all, I did like how taking Naru out of the picture did help the turn of events. And third, it was a good idea to get Ketsune and Keitaro together, this should be interesting. Please continue the story. Like I said before. This should be interesting. |
| Dim myarse as string 2007-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it. You should hop over and read my most recent "Being Mitsune Konno"...similiar vein. I really like your writing, so I look forward to more chapters in the future. I like the way you portray Kitsune as well. I find her so difficult to write. Anyhoo...great job. |
| Garvin 2000 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseboatload of potential. UPdate and update often.btw where's kanako in all this? |
| Vegetto800 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abusedamn dude!!, that was angsty...but damn did I enjoy the hell out of it. I mean when I write my stories I have drama or action or something like that, but angst...never tried it and after reading this story I might have to. so thanks man and keep it up. |
| bloodline 2007-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abusegood god! another kei x kit fic! good stuff, good stuff. anyway, yeah... it was quite angsty but you pulled it out greatly. though id like it better if naru was alive coz id really want to see how kei would end up with kit. but really, its great. be waiting for an update |
| Sweet Heavens 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseMore unhappiness with a dash of tragedy. Too many bloody zany fics in this section. More crying and yes it`ll make a damn good catalyst for the plot if you get kitsune to screw him! I demand it as there is not enough kitsune...it`s like bloody akamtasu to screw up a cute character. Take Kasumi Asakara from negima!! So ruined! Oh yeah more please and I mean it! |
| Chronos Astral 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Can't wait for the next chapters. |
| Ghost140 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYay there is not enough Kei/Kit fics and your seem to have a good one(maybe) only time will tell. |