More plz it feel's like the start to a great fic not that im saying that its not great on its own cause it so is. thanks for a great story

I liked it but, why a one shot?
If there's any good femslash on the fanfiction site it's always one chapter.

Wonderfully sweet.

I'd love to see this AU continue with Buffy and Willow eventually finding happiness together. I'll always support any Wiffy. ;)

Even if you never get the two girls together, it would be nifty to see a few more scenes from the show rewritten with Buffy loving Willow thoughts.

I liked it that Buffy told Willow about Xander's lie then instead o when she did on the show. I'm also glad that you had an aftermath of the big fight - all is forgiven - scene. I always hated that show because of that reason.

Buffy was in pain and I could just see the lack of support that Xander would give her, she did the right thing to run for a few months.

Good story

Good little story.
Dead Man's Party was an upsetting episode; Giles was the only one who seemed genuinely happy to see Buffy again, while the others just yelled at her, and even Joyce joined in the yelling, conveniently forgetting that she had told Buffy to never come back.
Don't let the plot bunnies distract you too much from Four Years Later.