Awsomeness. Keep going or I'll haunt you.

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Hehehehehe funny chapter... I like funny.

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I LIKE IT I LOVE IT I WANT SOME MORE OF IT I TRY SO HARD I CAN"T GET ENOUGH!

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KEP GOING! I WANT MORE GODNES! MORE I SAY!

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Yeah I like Charizard to. I always liked it how he always b-b-qed Ash.

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I WANT MORE! MORE I SAY!

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Hand of Fate is Crystal. I know it cause I read this so many times before. And I still like it.

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I applaude you my firend. I've been a fan of this series since I first read it when I was 14 (I'm 18 now). Keep going dude.

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Keep going dude. I WANT MORE!

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I applaude you. I want to know what happens next. Keep going I want to know what'll happen next with their twin kids.

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Comon man. Finish the series. It's an awsome pokemon series. I want to know what'll happen next.

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Hahahahahahaha. Good ol' Steve. I miss you Steve. You were awsome. I salute you my man.

Keep going with the last fic of the T.O.D Series dude. I want to know what'll happen with the twins.

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RIP Steve Irwin. Loved the Totodile-Hunter idea.

hahahaha "totodile hunter" funny yet bad pun, but funny none the less

and "sunset to sundown"? that's the same thing.

sunrise to sunset(or sundown) sounds alot better, Ash would never get any training down if it's from sunset to sundown

good start otherwise

... #faints. Is revived by muses long enoughg to make comments# Wow. This was even better than the first one! So, was that one setting the stage with Lugia and Amanda, and now we have the start of the Time of Destiny? As you say, very dark and like Empire Strikes Back. However, Ash actually did what I wanted Luke to do... Join the dark side...