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| Aphina 2008-03-27 ch 11, | abuselol look what happened to my muse. I loved this chapter, because I could evision it (hope I don't sound like a pervy voyeur) It was just loving and tense! |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 10, | abuselol Cory is a bad bad girl, I was laughing outloud at what she did to Danny. lol and no panties, she is a dirty dirty womean! |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 9, | abuselol you giv ethat idea to Flack and he can tie me down any time, I've always wanted to try the ice cube thing! lol That was really hot, and DAnny is a wicked man. |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 8, | abuselol Linds is dirty! Lol COuntry girls do know how to have fun! I really loved this chapter, esp the way she was teasing Flack! |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 7, | abuseHey, lol Cory's clever hiding one under the table. lol This is the hottest chapter by far I think, th croutchless panties were a nice touch |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 6, | abuselol a naughty pool party! I lvoe it, I'm tkaing a little break as you can tell, girl I never knoew you had it in you. |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 5, | abuselol nice to see the morning after ws as entertinaing as the night before I can't wait to see what the resst of these chapters ahve instore |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 4, | abuselol this was so hot I couldn't believe how steamy it got between Danny and Cory. I really love the passion in this chapter. |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 3, | abuselol I damn it your making me want naked Flack right now! |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 2, | abuselol you are so dirty! I applaud you for having the guts to out t up, I'm always a little nervious about doing sex scenes but I think your giving me a little bit of confidence here! |
| Aphina 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseDear God woman you are making me absolutely flustered here. You show everythign from the desier they have for each other to love underneathe the sex. lol You are way converting me to the Flack and Linds pairing. |
| Tainted2000 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI absolutly LOVE your writing. It's the best damn 'smut', as you call it, that I've read. I love Flack and I think you got him perfectly here. Without giving too much information, I've read this story 5 times now (all chapers) and have demanded that my boyfriend start copying the stuff that Flack does. Not only do you have a flair for writing erotic fiction, you also have an amazing ability to keep the reader interested in the other bits and want to know what's happening. Thank you so, SO much for this. I BEG of you to write more asap, my sex life NEEDS it LOL ;P |
| mj0621 2007-10-24 ch 9, | abuseHee. whatta chappie XD *clears throat* eherm kinky *ggs* yeah im waiting for some smackin' XD well i dont mind waiting cause i know its always worth the wait. lol did i say your muse is amazing? ;) -mj(wgf) |
| brainDamage089 2007-10-16 ch 9, | abuseO.O! omg... i...love...it! HOLY ** THAT WAS HOTT! DAMN! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!! A-MAZING! hot hot hot! LOVE!! SO SEXY! i want danny messer to bound me to a bed dammit! |
| magic-munchies 2007-10-15 ch 9, | abuseLove conquers all...so cute! |