Hey I just read your other story insecurity and I really liked it, and now I'm getting into this story of yours! Your a great writer, I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!

Ok, I feel stupid for not figuring out the chapter function, so now I have to send another one...

The plot is a good one Silver, I think you should continue it.
Because it's me, I was frequently distracted by the similar situations (of both Malik AND Bakura.) as well as the obviouse usage of the names Kaze and Malik. I suggest, if you don't want people to feel compelled to 'read in between the lines' you should use unique names that are not tied to you in any way...

Very interesting. On line twelve, I don't know weather it is a typo or not... "-'Damn Ryou, -" did you mean to type "Damn You," ?
Looks good, though short... >:3 keep up the good work!

Plz continue

continue! continue!

Well, lol, I'm not Sango'sSister, but there was one mistake and that was when you said: the some local pizza delivery. Other than that, it was good. *_* So I guess Bakura is afraid of being rejected by Malik-kun. Oh, poor Malik-kun (hugs Marik to comfort herself) Your poor abiou, Marik.

Marik: -_- he should die

SLAM!

DIS: >< Anyway...^_^ Please update soon! It seems interesting!

^_^ Bakura's becoming soft. (glomps Bakura plushie) YOU OLD SOFTIE, YOU!

Marik: (slaps her) ><

DIS: ;~; ^.^ Anyway, this looks good so far. Though, I am a bit confused. Who is Bakura friends with, but might get rejected by if he isn't friends with Malik-kun yet? I like how you got in depth with Bakura's character. (gives thumbs up) Off to the second chappie...(toddles away, dragging Marik by his hair)

Hey- I just got back from a trip and found that you're writing a new story! ^_^ With the same couple too, not that I mind, I adore this couple! Anyway, I think it's good so far. Just have fun with it and you'll be fine. I look forward to more, later ^_~

Oh. Again some nice idea, that's something I haven't read.., Well, ever. So you can just guess how interested I am, heh.. Guess I'd really like to read more, so if you can, could you continue soon?