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BatYisrael
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseSweet.
Eloquent.
Sad.
Wonderful.
Natalia
2008-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW!

That was so good it's NOT even funny!

I love Tiva!
Harleyzgirl
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseOne word: Wow!
miciaz
2007-11-03
ch 1, anon.
abusewow i love this fic! it's sad and sweet...wonderful!
Murgy31
2007-10-06
ch 1,
abuseWow! Thats a great story!
nattysuits
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseThis was so freakingly cute I almost keeled over. Wonderful *claps*
jessie1979
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, just beautiful.
Kandon Kuuson
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseGreat and awesome. The best words to describe this story. I'll have to read more of your work later. I think its sad they can't be together after that night. Keep it up your a great author. I'm really enjoying your work. Kandon ;)
Elaniea Casinya
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseThis has to be the sweetest, best TIVA story I have read. I adored this episode and was so sorry when it had to end. Thank you for continuing it just a little bit longer!
CarolinaH.Manning
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseit was a little sad but beautiful nevertheless
yllek789
2007-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abusePosted a review yesterday, but part of it went missing :)

And I love this line: "Her skin had a faint taste of almonds, and for a moment you thought you’d be poisoned by her". ... wow. Stunning.

Yllek
yllek789
2007-05-21
ch 1,
abuseThis story was added to my favorites the day you posted it and I just discovered I did not review it. So sorry.

It's beautiful. Love the way you wrote this from Tony's point of view. And I love this line: ... Wow. Stunning.
caitlin
2007-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abusereally great - you're an awesome writer
OhThoseEyes
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseWow! I found this today after reading your latest update on Feeling the Heat! You are very talented! I really love your writing style! Although Gabby is my favorite, Tiva comes in a very close second. I hope you continue to write Tiva stories!
Moony's Lady
2007-04-21
ch 1,
abuseSuch a beautiful way to picture Tony's thoughts. I think you definitely got his character, even the most complex sides of him. And I have to compliment you on how you handled the whole story basing it on the ep, in particular this part made me smile:

Her hand sets on yours, she approaches you, and you realise that is wasn’t the luxury of the hotel room, nor the fanciness of her dress, nor the roles you were embodying. It’s never been the atmosphere. It’s been the two of you, just the two of you, all the time.

Precisely my thoughts. Gee, two people who do not have any feeling for each other would never be such good actors.
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