Somehow, whenever Riku goes "pretty pretty" I think he's gone insane. Though, oh gosh, I really am falling in love with sadistic!Roxas/masochistic!Riku. *shot*

i loved this :)

alternate universe roxiku happens to be my favorite of KH fanfics..:D

just lovely.

your style is just so... so *good*, for lack of a better word. haha.

and the plot.. *dies*

roxas sounds so fucking vicious and adorable and you-just-can't-leave-him-no-matter-how-hard-he-fucks/hurts/pains-you like.

and that's something i'm into 3

and the riku in this is heartbreaking!

but i loved him just the same:)

faved!

If you doesn't state that it's Riku in the A/N I would have never know. I mean, nothing in the story implies that it's Riku at all, so why don't you made this open ended and let the readers imagine who the uke is? That'll get a lot of non Roxas x Riku readers to read this. Not that I've anything against this pairing . . . Anyway it's good to see Riku as uke and Roxas as seme for a change.

-_-OMG! so cute! you write the bestest kh yaoi ever! you rock! keep up the good work!-_-

I liked it! _ The repetition of "pretty pretty _" worked rather well... and it nicely underlined this sort of addiction he has... (am suddenly reminded of the kelly clarkson song, it fits this very well). RokuRiku is such a dysfunctional relationship sometimes (poor Riku, he's everyone's BDSM toy

Ooh, that was really good. I would LOVE an Axel/Riku fic. With an uke Riku. Oh yeah. And I'm thinking of the word "fake". Like, Axel's love for Riku is completely fake because he pretends to love him and Riku knows he doesn't because it feels so cold. Anyway, just a thought. E-mail me if you either continue with the Roxas/Riku or if you plan on writing the Axel/Riku one. Anywho, loved the story, hope for more. _

Oh wow, I've always wanted to write something like this... But I just can't pull off the style.

-is jealous of you-

It's not the second POV that gives me crap it's just the hardcore/mentally-unstable angst that I can never quite get write... Ah well...

At least there are people like YOU to pull it off so I can read it! _

But seriously this was awesome and pwnsome. Yup.

-nods eagerly-

Um, I'm not gonna request anything since you already dedicated a story to me.

But sheesh you've really been writing a lot lately huh? I've got writers block. Mur. -_-

This was awesome once again!

*bliss*

Ah, sadistic!Roxas and uke!Riku is my favorite type of Roxiku. :D You make me wriggle with joy. ... I hope Riku doesn't die at the end, not right after he decides he's going to leave but then doesn't. Because wow, that'd suck. ; ;

I look forward to more of sadistic!Roxas and uke!Riku from you. :D Because you said there might be more. So... I'm waiting.

Ohh, request! Hmm. I'm biased toward Axel/Riku, but I like Sora/Riku and Roxas/Riku, too. So... how about Axel/Riku? Roxas/Riku if you can't work out anything for that. Prompt: "not sorry." Thanks! :D Good luck

EHEHEHE. Roxas/Riku love. I feel so so sad for poor Riku.

And your last paragraph? I think it stopped my breath for a moment. X3 You're just getting better and better. Consider submitting one for Anime North? I dunno, I'm pretty sure you said you go to that in your profile. You should DEFINATELY consider it if you're going again this year.

As to the word, hmm...

Rejection. (*grins* My favourite word to describe angst XD) And.. if you decide to use mine... I dunno. I love Soriku, but... Axel/Riku is nice... Roxas/Riku even rarer and nicer... X3)

It was WONDEFUL!

See, now? Riku is a great uke... XD

ANYways

Now about that angsty word...

-acts like Winnie The Pooh-

Think, think, think...

How about "Void" O.O I dunno.

Or maybe "Torn" O.o... I don't know where these stupid ideas are coming from.

Oh well, I think it should be "Void"

AxelRiku, of course! XD

And again, I loved this!

Ah! I absolutely LOVED it! It's nice to see Riku be uke sometimes, and equally lovely to see Roxas be seme *growls*.

An angsty word...? Hmm... How about Drowning, for Riku x Roxas, because they're the smexiest KH boys ever