I loved this story

Great story! I kind of felt bad for Gary but I'm glad he had a good ending.

There were a few places where you spelled Mr. Herriman's name wrong.

The story had a nice ending, and I really enjoyed the crossover.

This chapter was funny, especially the Imaginary GIR.

This chapter is cute, and I'm looking forward to reading more of the story.

what a nice endding

The crossover has an interesting idea and plot. The first chapter is a good start.

Pretty good story. I kinda wondered what happened to Gary (saw the episode where Tim locked him up in his mind), hope you write more. :)

That was a really nice ending, though I would have excpected Gary to try and push Tommy away during the hug. Saying "hey not cool."

Coco IS the coolest. She craps gifts, thankfully sealed in an egg.

I think you must have been high when writing this. There's no way Timmy would hit on Frankie. Also, you made Timmy seem to kind and nervous. We all know Timmy is almost never nervous or kind!

Other than that, this fic is pretty good!

Aw, that was sweet. I liked how you had Gary still care about Timmy, he did create him after all. Have you done an Ivader Zim Fairly Odd Parents crossover?

you just HAD to throw GIR in there didn't you.:)

ooh fight about whose the coolest, I myself hold a soft spot for Bloo.

I could not resist reading this story when I saw the summary. When I'm done reading the whole thing I'll tell you what I thought.