nicely done... you should continue

a bit short for my tastes but thanks for the Chizuru appearance... she's always good for a grin

lovely... good writing...

What had he just volunteered for?


awesome! good work

Yay! Thanks for the update X)

Oh, anonymous...why don't you ever read the Author's Notes?

you got this from "stranger then fiction" the movie in 2006. you not slick. it's alright through. i loved the movie.

Poor hanataro...hahaha, the latest chapter was pretty good, hope you're able to keep updating!

WOW! Hilarious! I can just see hanatarou looking around. going "hello? hello?" LOL! We all need some more hanatarou fics and I look forward to the next chap. (p.s. the narrator telling hanatorou what chizuru's intentions are would be hi-freaking-larious "She want's to do WHAT?!")

Sorry I didn't review this when it came out. This chapter was just as awesome as all the others. Just as short but I really didn't mind this time. All the narrations were awesome. And the story is just as awesome. Hope to see more soon.

Ha-HA! Awesome new chappie. ^__^ And you UPDATED. Sooner than I thought. Congrats.
Better flow this time and I enjoyed the interaction between the characters. ^__^ Keep it up.

Oh noes! Taro-kun you don't know what you're in for.(Poor kid, even his name is girly...) But it's fun just to sit here and read what happens to him next, even if I do feel bad for him.

I think that 'what the vell' was talking about Chizuru, not Orihime.

Wow...

I think you're moving the characters along well, so there's nothing I really have to say with regards to critiquing...

Woohoo! Dia de Los Muertos...in Japan! It's like a fusion of cultures!

Hooray! Another chapter!

i liked the dia de los muerots reference...very original...i don't think anyone has metioned that b4...well another good chapter...