 Vanna Tove 2009-09-04 . chapter 1i loved this. unlike most, it wasnt trying to be all sweet and mushy...typically romantic (not that those stories arent good too)
i liked how it seemed so real. a tragic kinda love. where they're both pretty much ** up, but together it doesnt matter.
God, i could write forever how much i loved this. but i wont.
great job, it was very enjoyable and quite beautiful :] |
 Joseph Santiago 2009-08-28 . chapter 1mm perfect |
 LucksFullmoon 2009-07-05 . chapter 1You did a wonderful job at portraying BB and Raven. And this is a realy tastful Lemon, Job Well Done.
one thing...I just about fell out of my chair laughing at the original Masochist coments(that being Raven't diffrent threats of bodly harm) |
 Midnight Larkin 2009-05-30 . chapter 1Absolutely wonderful writing. You really made me feel their connection with the way you wrote their relationship. Somehow Raven was OOC but at the same time very in character, if that makes any sense. You did a wonderful job on discription and a suggestion to you is that you write a companion piece about their conversation afterwards concerning the issues in the last lines of the fic. (about him hurting her and wanting to discontinue their nightly esccapades; it would be very similar to the discussion in "Twilight", but i can see it being a very nice argument) That's just a suggestion though and perhaps a very selfish one at that, lol.
You did a very wonderful job and I thank you for writing this. It is definitely going on my favorites list.
-anon goddess ;) |
 yumyumgopop 2009-02-03 . chapter 1this story was very sweet; it made me smile while reading it. i liked it very much!
thank you for writing it! |
 hydroknight01 2008-12-14 . chapter 1An incredible piece of work, friend. If you're not proud, you damn-well should be.
Not exactly the average slice of lemon, but perhaps that's what makes so bloody good.
Most certainly favourited.
Hydroknight01 |
 stormchi 2008-12-04 . chapter 1 this is a great piece and it gives an ending that they deserve |
 ttfantt 2008-10-01 . chapter 1that was pretty good. i loved it, your a great author! keep going! |
 Cicero Amaral 2008-08-29 . chapter 1Not only erotic, but also romantic.
In one word, genius.
May your pen never rest. |
 cRaZyMaN676 2008-05-03 . chapter 1an entire one-shot, dedicated to Beast Boy and Raven alone. I bow to your genius, and ask very loudly, "WHERE THE HELL IS EVERYBODY GETTING THIS STUFF?! I COULD NEVER THINK OF ANYTHING QUITE LIKE THIS TO SAVE MY LIFE!! Or could I?..." NICE!! |
 ichigo85 2008-01-02 . chapter 1man i just love this story you got to keep on go man |
 spedclass 2007-12-02 . chapter 1Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon. |
 Roxie Arie 2007-08-13 . chapter 1i loved it! You captured them perfectly in this romantic act. It's absolutely going on the Fav list. |
 Sage Vale 2007-08-03 . chapter 1Oh my.
That was brilliantly told. I thought that was a fascinating story, and from an angle I've never actually had the pleasure of reading before. Always there's Raven's insecurities to think about, and there are so many ways to take that, but how often do you think about Beast Boy's insecurities when it comes to intimacy? This is the first real time I've seen those two mixed, and you did a fantastic job with it =)
I was wondering if you'd be interested in writing a RobStar fic of something similar? Seeing as they have some . . . difficulties. But, just a random thought. Beautiful job, m'dear =D
-- Sage |
 The Critique 2007-07-26 . chapter 1You are very confident in your ideas and in your ability to portray them through words, this story just shows complete comprehension of personalities and flows without a hitch. The masochist approach was well justified and very nicely portrayed, and done in a tasteful fashion, which is FAR more than I can say for most of the other stories on here.
You. Are. Talented.
Please continue writing, it would be a crime to stop :[ |