Oh lord, this is so gloriously sad. Beautifully done

Oh, gosh. I just...

This is so powerful, and so amazing. I was just trying to find a good AkuDem for my friend and I found this and was going to point it out to her for a laugh because she hates Zemyx, but...

This is just one of those stories where you feel yourself holdign your breath until the end. Truly amazing.

Poor Demyx...

Made me cry!

Such good writing. Amazing job.

That last line made me tear up. ;A;

Oh, that was beautiful.
I think you broke my heart a little bit.
But that was beautiful.

wow.
that was beautiful
my heart is like... dead after reading the end :[
srsly, i nearly cried at the sheer raw power of it.
(L)

i love this. it's so beautifully sad. great work ^^

Wow.
This one brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully done.

Sad but oh so beautiful. I love Zemyx. It's my fave pairing but this was wonderful in it's own way. Sad though. Ta ta.

Oh ;o; that was so sad, and so greatly written! I especially love how Axel and Demyx don't kiss and how you described AkuRoku and Zemyx :) it was perfect

it brought tears to my eyes. it's wonderfully and beautiflly angsty. best Zemyx I've ever read.

Oh. my. I'm just... wow, when I read AkuDemy - being an Akuroku fan - I scrolled over. Multiple times. But I heard a lot about you and read your other fics, so I finally thought, "You know what? I'll try it." And oh, am I so glad I did. It's so full of emotion and it reminded me that yes, though Axel did so much for Roxas, he also was a cold-blooded murderer, and Demyx keeps thinking all these things in the back of his mind and of Zexion and- I really can't make coherent review, but I just have to show how awed I am by your storytelling.

And the last line? "Axel sobs Roxas' name hoarsely and Demyx screams Zexion's, a wounded plea for his return." That killed me. It totally ripped my hearts into tiny shreds. Good job, fantastic...

Jeez...I don't want to sound like a broken record, but I nearly cried. This was...wonderful. Marvelous. I...just don't know what to say. I'm an Axel fan, all the way, but I did forget that he murdered half of the Organization. Wow...just wow. Thank you for creating such a wonderful piece of work! It was truly worth it.

I want to cry now.

This was so GOOD. All angsty and... and... -sniffle.- Wah! Why did Axel have to kill Zexion?! -faves.-

Wow. So short but full of emotion. o_o I absoutly love it. I've read some other one-shots were people have at least Axel using Demyx to forget Roxas, but they never quite seem to voice the angst as well as you did. Great job.