Great POV on Vince's part. I wonder...what will Vince do to deceive his children..or will he go to that extent? This song is perfect for Vince's situation. Great work! Keep writin' writin' writin'!

Okay, you ALMOST had me feeling bad for Vince earlier...but then you made me realize he's just like how he always is. I liked how he went over his thoughts about the recent events with his family, and most of all how he summed it all up in the end with his decision that he would win the war. ) Very cool.

Woah! Great Tiara, as usual, of course. _

I love the ending, how Vince gets the evil (I'm assuming) grin, and doesn't cry. That is just like Vince McMahon. Good descriptions, and I liked the quote from the bible. That was a nice touch. Great piece of work!

Wow... this is really... wow. Cheese of loveness comes my way... you get a happy cookie for thy troubles!

I loved it, especially the lines with the astericks... its awesome, I hope you write a sequel!

Always Delusional,

Chelli

PS

line from the bible was a nice touch