 oOKayleeOo 2008-10-02 . chapter 1hey, i really enjoyed this story. is it going to get an update or should i delete it from my updates? |
 tripleRRR 2008-06-23 . chapter 10Very nice story so far, keep up the good work! |
 Mcmacladdie 2008-01-29 . chapter 10 Please, PLEASE update soon! |
 oOKayleeOo 2007-11-01 . chapter 10 hey, i'm really enjoying the story! please update soon! |
 B Oots 2007-09-11 . chapter 10 I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how the investigation goes from here? |
 Lunar Kasumi 2007-09-08 . chapter 10ok so i absolutely lovee this story!! its so addictive! |
 GothikStrawberry 2007-09-07 . chapter 10I'm glad you kept this chapter, because even if it didn't move the plot along - at least as far as we know so far - it showed some important insights into Sanchez and the students and faculty of Xaviers.
And it feels a little like the calm before the storm ... before the perp tries to get away and Sanchez has to chase after him. It's like I can see him lurking in the shadows of this chapter ... I mean if he is a telepath and Sanchez was projecting he knows how she feels ... and now that some of the students and teachers are warming up to her the perp should feel the rope around his neck tightening ... so to speak.
Ooh and I'm glad my reviews give you a little boost. *grins* It feels good to be appreciated. Seriously though, I love your writting and this is - IMO - the best story so far.
So keep up the good work. :) |
 MeadowLark4491 2007-09-04 . chapter 10I love this story. I liked the interaction with the empath. please update asap. |
 B Oots 2007-09-01 . chapter 9 I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how she makes the list for who the perp might be? |
 GothikStrawberry 2007-08-30 . chapter 9Wonderful chapter! I loved to see Hank.:) And I can't wait to see what Sanchez will do once she gets back on her feet. :) |
 MeadowLark4491 2007-08-29 . chapter 9Another well written chapter. I do love your stories. |
 B Oots 2007-08-09 . chapter 8 I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read where the crime scene is and what they find there? |
 J.W.L 2007-08-08 . chapter 8Solid characters, Good writing, Bustagut laughing moments, Suspence, Logical and well thought out character matchups, an excellent story with a lot of promise.
Please don't keep us in suspense too long. |
 MeadowLark4491 2007-08-08 . chapter 8So we now have to wait two weeks in suspense...You're nice... It was very good. |
 GothikStrawberry 2007-08-08 . chapter 8What you can't stop now ... I want to know what happened! But I guess I can wait two weeks if I have to ... but only if I absolutly have too. :)
I really like this chapter and how Sanchez picked up on the social structure at Xaviers ... you stripped away their 'freaky genes' and showed that they are just kids ... human kids. Like Sanchez said in a strange way that's really comforting but also a little scary to considering what one human being can do to another as Sunshine's case clearly shows.
Anyway another amazing chapter! I on the edge of my seat waiting for the next. :) |