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oOKayleeOo
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
hey, i really enjoyed this story. is it going to get an update or should i delete it from my updates?
tripleRRR
2008-06-23 . chapter 10
Very nice story so far, keep up the good work!
Mcmacladdie
2008-01-29 . chapter 10
Please, PLEASE update soon!
oOKayleeOo
2007-11-01 . chapter 10
hey, i'm really enjoying the story! please update soon!
B Oots
2007-09-11 . chapter 10
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how the investigation goes from here?
Lunar Kasumi
2007-09-08 . chapter 10
ok so i absolutely lovee this story!! its so addictive!
GothikStrawberry
2007-09-07 . chapter 10
I'm glad you kept this chapter, because even if it didn't move the plot along - at least as far as we know so far - it showed some important insights into Sanchez and the students and faculty of Xaviers.

And it feels a little like the calm before the storm ... before the perp tries to get away and Sanchez has to chase after him. It's like I can see him lurking in the shadows of this chapter ... I mean if he is a telepath and Sanchez was projecting he knows how she feels ... and now that some of the students and teachers are warming up to her the perp should feel the rope around his neck tightening ... so to speak.

Ooh and I'm glad my reviews give you a little boost. *grins* It feels good to be appreciated. Seriously though, I love your writting and this is - IMO - the best story so far.

So keep up the good work. :)
MeadowLark4491
2007-09-04 . chapter 10
I love this story. I liked the interaction with the empath. please update asap.
B Oots
2007-09-01 . chapter 9
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how she makes the list for who the perp might be?
GothikStrawberry
2007-08-30 . chapter 9
Wonderful chapter! I loved to see Hank.:) And I can't wait to see what Sanchez will do once she gets back on her feet. :)
MeadowLark4491
2007-08-29 . chapter 9
Another well written chapter. I do love your stories.
B Oots
2007-08-09 . chapter 8
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read where the crime scene is and what they find there?
J.W.L
2007-08-08 . chapter 8
Solid characters, Good writing, Bustagut laughing moments, Suspence, Logical and well thought out character matchups, an excellent story with a lot of promise.

Please don't keep us in suspense too long.
MeadowLark4491
2007-08-08 . chapter 8
So we now have to wait two weeks in suspense...You're nice... It was very good.
GothikStrawberry
2007-08-08 . chapter 8
What you can't stop now ... I want to know what happened! But I guess I can wait two weeks if I have to ... but only if I absolutly have too. :)

I really like this chapter and how Sanchez picked up on the social structure at Xaviers ... you stripped away their 'freaky genes' and showed that they are just kids ... human kids. Like Sanchez said in a strange way that's really comforting but also a little scary to considering what one human being can do to another as Sunshine's case clearly shows.

Anyway another amazing chapter! I on the edge of my seat waiting for the next. :)
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